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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 1:02 pm

The skys setting was a vibrant color, one that was a blue shade, as the clouds hovered over, only light, not dark for it was not due to rain anytime soon. Yet far north heavy rain clouds did approach this way, in due time a set of 15 minutes per say may the rain be exposed in this setting The sun now began to set over the horizon as the moon was now beginning to rise, a good time of approximately 7 or 8 o'clock.
Running through a forest with shrubs and tree's filled alike, along with various creatures that dwell within, whether it be slugs, spiders, caterpillars, you name it, happened to be two females as they dash down a rugged dirt path, cuts all over there faces and knees. Mud kicked up from the ground as the shoes were soaked.
The first female looked to be the age of 15, with a pair of jeans on and a black sweatshirt. The second looked much older, wearing what looked to be a Gothic outfit, fishnet leggings, necklaces, etc. The two panted hard as they ran past the obstacles in there way, finally coming to a dead end in which was a fence.
"Shit, we're trapped!" yelled the younger one looking to her friend.
Before anything else could be said, a scream echoed through the woods, and all that was left was a gunshot.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


Posts : 637
Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 1:19 pm

I awoke in a cold sweat and sat up with a snap of movement.I checked my torso where a bullet had pierced my heart and realized it was now gone. My clothes where also different a black outfit and sandals. I looked to my side my friend beside me.
"whats going on?" I asked myself now stumbling to my feet. i began poking Miharu with a nearby stick.
"you alive?"i asked continuing to poke at her. I then heard a noise. it sounded like, footsteps of people running. Soon i was able to see the owners to the feet. A bunch of other people wearing the same clothes i found myself in where now surrounding us with swords threatening to stab me. i dropped the stick on the ground and stood there with a pail expression on my face.
"uh...hi?" i said. I hopped they where friendly but with having the swords in my face i was losing that hope.Soon a man in a white haori came into view. His beard was really long and almost touched the ground and he carried a walking stick.He raised his hand up in the air then lowered it signaling for the other people to stand down.I looked at the man with deep confusion then remembered something....how was i even still alive?
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 1:30 pm

I now felt the embrace of something poking at me. I felt like it was all a bad dream as I slept, finally after the second poke I know rubbed my eyes, only to realize how the hell was I still alive?
I shot up from my spot with panic only to be surrounded by many people with swords and all in the same outfit, except the one that stood in front of us. It looked to be an old man and he seemed unsturdy at the least, as the first thing that came to mind was 'Shave that thing off that's growing and manifesting on your chin', but i did not say this out loud. After you had said hi, the man now signaled for them to lower their weapons as I felt a little more at ease but still nervous. I then looked down and saw my clothes, they weren't the same, I wondered who did this. Yet I wasn't as worried about my clothes as I was dieing; again.
This now reminded me and I checked my torso as well but saw no bullet marking on my skin, which I was now questioning myself as to if it even happened in the first place.
The man now moved forward, the others backing up for him.
"And who might you two be?" he asked with a firm voice as I gulped.
"Uh, I'm Miharu, and this is my friend Raita. We're lost, we're not sure we really got here, actually." I rubbed the back of my head laughing, hoping that the amusement would help lighten up the tensity between them.
"What training have you gone through?" he then asked once more. I wasn't sure how to respond to this so I just gave a random answer.
"We're pretty good, we got skills in sword fighting." I was feeding them what they wanted to hear. I assumed by them having swords, that's what they meant.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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Join date : 2010-06-22
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Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 1:40 pm

I looked at Miharu with an unsatisfied look on my face i looked at the old man.
"Sir, we don't know how we got here, please forgive us for the intrusion. It may not look it but we just died via gunfire. then we woke up here wearing these clothes." I spoke the truth and hopped he would understand. This whole thing just felt off somehow.I mean, how were we even still alive in the first place?where are we and who are all these people? I had many questions that were probably better left unasked at the moment.
"please sir, can you tell us where we are?" I asked, I was completely unsure of what to do or say.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 2:01 pm

The man ruffled his beard when he spoke as he now saw through my lie after what you had just said. He gave me this look that scared me shitless. I shivered a little after getting his cold shoulder then sighed.
"You are in Soul Society, and this is the Gotei 13. We will find a place for you soon. For now, follow."
He turned his back to us as he motioned for the others to leave. They began to talk about the new ryoka and quickly hurried off without making the head captain mad.
I nudged you and I got up to my feet following behind. Yet I couldn't help but feel creeped out as I had this feeling someone was watching us, and being crafty about it. I then turned my head and saw the figure move from one alley to the next. I caught a glimpse of his short silver hair as he was swift to get out of sight every time I glanced. I then whispered into your ear feeling very unsure about this.
"I think he has us being watched."
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 2:56 pm

I looked at Miharu unsure of what to think.
"probably." i whispered back
"I mean, we are kinda new here." I pointed out.I continued to follow the old man passing several doors as we began walking past the different sectors we passed sector 12 a man in another of the same Haori as the old man wore came out the doors. He was wearing very odd facpaint and a mask. He too had a sword.The man watched as we passed and not once take his gold eyes off of us.Finally we made it to sector 1 where the head captain/old guy lived.
"take a seat a meeting of your placement will take place shortly."The old man told us. I nodded doing as i was told. Causing trouble rite now would be the last thing id want to do. As i sat there and had a chance to look around and process things the more uneasy i felt.I began to feel like i knew this place...somehow.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 3:56 pm

As we passed through the sectors I noticed a man or thing, looking at me from afar, at the both of us really. I felt a little uneasy about this as I now let my hair shroud my eyes so I didn't have to look directly at him but could allow my face to be hidden as I passed him. Once making our way to sector 1 we took a seat when entering the building. I folded my arms on the table looking around the large room. It was much more different than I would expect. I was now having a weird feeling as if we were at a Cosplay convention of some sort, but that couldn't possibly be the case, since they seemed way to serious about it.
As the old man too a seat in a main chair fit just for him, he now looked at us while hitting his cane on the ground.
"Now then. We will begin the placing. First, a Captains meeting. We will see which placement is fit for each of you."
I sighed once more, i really didn't want to go through with this.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:02 pm

As i sat in the far corner of the room awaiting my placement i saw the captains begin to come in the room one by one. I looked over at Miharu.
"i wonder whats gonna happen?" I said I had mixed feelings in some ways i was excited in others, afraid.
(awws this was short one lol)
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:08 pm

The captains voice then boomed loud and clear as everyone lined in on there order of numbering. I didn't know what the difference's was, I assumed he'd throw us in any division, I mean all the captains were based upon only fighting, right?
My stomach then felt uneasy as I wasn't quite positive that we should be going through with this. I skimmed over each captain one by one. Once I reached the 3rd division I then whispered quietly to you.
"Raita, that's the guy that was following us. The one with the silver hair." he looked to be smiling which kind of creeped me out but I tried to ignore it, his joy seemed to overwhelming. I moved on to see who else. Once I got the 12th i noticed it was the same person from earlier, as his eyes were seemed to notice my stare as I quickly looked back at you.
"I'm going to die again. There is no way I'm going to live this freakish nightmare. Where's a gun-"
"Captains," the chief interupted me as I went silent. "We have now located 2 new founding Ryoka. We will be placing them in one of your divisions."
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:17 pm

I continued to sit in my place staying silent, believing i was suppose to stay quiet. The captain of squad 12 kept glancing in Miharus direction and i began to giggle quietly.
"hey sis, That guy keeps looking at you." I told Miharu nudging her a bit. The other captains kept their faces forward listening to the orders of the old man. I wondered why the old guy was leading all these people anyway he himself looked like he was old enough to die. or die..again.
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Ulquiorra Schiffer*

Ulquiorra Schiffer*


Posts : 194
Join date : 2010-06-21
Location : Hueco Mundo inside Las Noches

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:27 pm

I walk in being escorted by the soul reapers.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:35 pm

"I can see that." I said giving her a 'duh' kind of look. I rubbed a hand on the back of my head, aggravated that he was making us even stay here. I wanted to know where I was, and how I get home, not decide my life. He then went on about this speech that I totally ignored as finally he was begging to decide whom to place where.
"Ichimaru." his voice was more like a demand rather than a request, as the man walked up.
"Yes Yama-Ji?" he said in a playful tone yet sarcastic with a smile plastered on his face. The main captain didn't seem to care much, probably assuming this was his usual personality.
I now looked to see who he called and saw the silver haired man step up.
"The one named Raita will be placed in your squad for the time being." he then looked over to the two of us, none of the captains knew which person was who.
"Raita, come up."
He nudged his head indicating to go stand by the man.
The one known as Ichimaru turned his head awaiting to see which girl it was.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:39 pm

I stood up nervously and walked up by the one named Ichimaru and stood by him.I kept my head slightly tilted down saying nothing.My long silver-ish blue hair covered my golden eyes. I awaited my next order and awaited seeing who Miharu got stuck with.
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Ulquiorra Schiffer*

Ulquiorra Schiffer*


Posts : 194
Join date : 2010-06-21
Location : Hueco Mundo inside Las Noches

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:40 pm

I throw the soul reapers into the buildings.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:45 pm

I now had this uneasy feeling of who I would be placed with. I felt bad she was put in the same team as the stalker from earlier, but maybe she'd get more information on him.
"Hello Raita, I'm Gin." he smiled his usual tacky grin and waved a hand as you came up to his side.
"Ichimaru, dismissed."
"Thank you~" he responded then began to turn towards the door.
"Let's go miss."
I now was totally left alone, I wasn't sure if I could handle who I would be placed with. I then waited for further orders.
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Ulquiorra Schiffer*

Ulquiorra Schiffer*


Posts : 194
Join date : 2010-06-21
Location : Hueco Mundo inside Las Noches

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:48 pm

I run back to Hueco Mundo.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:50 pm

(GO AWAY!)
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:51 pm

I walked with this Ichimaru Gin character outside of the building and smiled feeling a drastic change in the air pressure.
"oh my god, i can breath gees i never thought an old guy could be so...scary."I mumbled looking around.
"Kurotsuchi Mayuri, you will take Miharu into your division."the old man ordered.The old man again tilted his head as if to tell now Miharu to come up and stand next to her new captain.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 4:58 pm

I wondered who the hell that could be until the captain now took his stand in the middle. I couldn't believe it, it was the same captain that kept looking at me earlier. I now knew I was doomed, I had to be. My hunches were confirmed, I was going to die again. Yay me.
As the man stepped forward he grinned as if in a satisfied way. I started to regret the fact that I stood up and began to walk over. I now stood by him as some part about him felt like crushing me (Strong Spiritual Pressure). I now was finding it hard to stand still. Finally he dismissed everyone.
Gin laughed at this comment of yours, so far he seemed some what friendly. But maybe it was just a fake smile.
"I'm sure that was his spiritual pressure that had worn you down."
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Byakuya Kuchiki

Byakuya Kuchiki


Posts : 155
Join date : 2010-06-19
Location : Soul Society but in Konoha at the moment

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 5:01 pm

I walk in to see Gin.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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Join date : 2010-04-29
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 5:03 pm

(Everyone already left and went their own separate ways. Your kinda late)
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Byakuya Kuchiki


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Location : Soul Society but in Konoha at the moment

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 5:04 pm

I just got Black Shadow ready for her assignment that why I'm late she is in my squad now.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 5:09 pm

I looked at gin and smiled slightly.
"eh heh, maybe."i said rubbing the back of my head in embarrassment.
"so uh,your a captain...of what exactly?"i asked being oblivious to anything around me.I was so confused, so tired.
"I still don't know whats going on...all i know is i was shot point blank." I explained. i hopped soon id get some answers.Captain mayuri looked at his new pupil then looked back at the head captain and nodded.
"Come with me." He said turning and walking towards the door.
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Byakuya Kuchiki

Byakuya Kuchiki


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 5:11 pm

Black Shadow walks beside me and smiles at Raita I stood there and watched her.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 5:22 pm

"Uh, alright." I followed behind the man keeping to myself as all the others followed behind to get out the door and get on with their lives. I didn't know what his team meant or how strong they were at sword fighting, but I had a bad feeling that I wasn't going to fit in quite well with them. We walked on until we reached a large building, I assumed this was where his division was.
"Uh, Captain Kurotsuchi, what exactly is each team for? I mean whats the difference between them? Don't they all have the same dogma?"
I wanted to talk to him more but he seemed to give that attitude where 'i don't give a damn' kind of turn. I waited if he would give a response.
"I'm a captain of a Squad 3" he used blunt words as if to end the conversation from going any further yet he went on.
"For now I'm not sure of your capabilities, so I'll place you as 5th seat for starters. Just because I like you already." with this he smiled bright.
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