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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 11:57 pm

"Sure, I'd love to." I pointed out as we began to leave the 12th division now heading towards the 3rd.
Gin passed by the 4th, 5th and 6th division asking people around for you, yet had no luck as he continued on for his search.
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Mayuri Kurotsuchi

Mayuri Kurotsuchi


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 12:04 am

Raita Serpantine wrote:
Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
(Why did you add me in the shower, Raita?)

cause it made sissy extremely happy XD



(Did it now? I'll have to come out of the shower more often for her then...)
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Raita Serpantine

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 12:20 am

Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
Raita Serpantine wrote:
Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
(Why did you add me in the shower, Raita?)

cause it made sissy extremely happy XD



(Did it now? I'll have to come out of the shower more often for her then...)


hahahahaha XD maybe you should you should hear about when we make you shirtless too she goes nuts.
Btw...shes going to kill me now.
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Raita Serpantine

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 12:24 am

On our way twards the 3rd divsion i spotted my catain in the 7th division.I walked over to him and poked his shoulder.
"you look kinda stressed, whats up?" i asked stading behind him smiling.While mayuri was walking around he spotted Miharu and her friend near ichimaru gin. he siddenly began to feel jelous that she was near another guy.
"what is this im feeling, and why that girl?" he asked himself as he stood in plane site.
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Mayuri Kurotsuchi

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 12:28 am

Raita Serpantine wrote:
On our way twards the 3rd divsion i spotted my catain in the 7th division.I walked over to him and poked his shoulder.
"you look kinda stressed, whats up?" i asked stading behind him smiling.While mayuri was walking around he spotted Miharu and her friend near ichimaru gin. he siddenly began to feel jelous that she was near another guy.
"what is this im feeling, and why that girl?" he asked himself as he stood in plane site.

(Your making me sound so cold hearted as if I never had feelings. Well, am I suppose to fall in love with her then?)
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Raita Serpantine

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 12:32 am

Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
Raita Serpantine wrote:
On our way twards the 3rd divsion i spotted my catain in the 7th division.I walked over to him and poked his shoulder.
"you look kinda stressed, whats up?" i asked stading behind him smiling.While mayuri was walking around he spotted Miharu and her friend near ichimaru gin. he siddenly began to feel jelous that she was near another guy.
"what is this im feeling, and why that girl?" he asked himself as he stood in plane site.

(Your making me sound so cold hearted as if I never had feelings. Well, am I suppose to fall in love with her then?)

yes, yes you are....you just met her for the first time in the RP gimme a break. >.>
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Miharu Hachiko

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 12:57 am

Raita Serpantine wrote:
Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
Raita Serpantine wrote:
Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
(Why did you add me in the shower, Raita?)

cause it made sissy extremely happy XD



(Did it now? I'll have to come out of the shower more often for her then...)


hahahahaha XD maybe you should you should hear about when we make you shirtless too she goes nuts.
Btw...shes going to kill me now.

....Ohhhh your so dead -___-
And Mayuri, why do you keep popping in here out of no where? xD
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Miharu Hachiko

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 1:00 am

"Hm, ah Raita!" Gin turned around and smiled finally finding you, well, you finding him.
"I actually was looking for you believe it or not. I have a few questions I needed to ask, if it's not too much?" he was intending on asking questions about you, but still was in the situation where he didn't know what exactly to ask.
I crossed my arms keeping to myself while the two talked.
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Raita Serpantine

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 10:47 am

i looked at gin for a moment in question.
"yeah, no problem. what is it?" i asked looking up at him.Mayuri walked up to the three of us and looked down at Miharu.
(ahhh writers black on Mayuris part...need help >.<)
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Miharu Hachiko

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 1:34 pm

(I love how you put that, it's like what a creeper would do xD)

"I'd rather not ask the questions out in the open, rather somewhere else."
he added.
I then felt this freaky aura hovering over me. "Why do I feel like death just approached me?" I said with an eyebrow raised, having no idea my captain was even behind me.
"Hello there Captain Kurotsuchi!" Gin then said cheerfully.
My eyes then shot open as I now knew my captain was the one behind me as I twitched.
"He just heard what I said, didn't he?" .____.
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Mayuri Kurotsuchi

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 2:06 pm

"I heard exactly what you said. Your very disrepectful might I add, that is no way to speak of your captain. I'd prefer an apology." he looked down at her as she turned around to face him.
Hearing Ichimaru speak to him he gave him a look of disgust.
"I'm not talking to you."
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Raita Serpantine

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 2:12 pm

i looked up at Miharus captain then at Miharu.
"hey, ill catch up with you later sis." i said then turned to Ichimaru gin.
"where would you like to talk?" i asked.
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Mayuri Kurotsuchi

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 4:17 pm

Miharu Hachiko wrote:
Raita Serpantine wrote:
Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
Raita Serpantine wrote:
Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
(Why did you add me in the shower, Raita?)

cause it made sissy extremely happy XD



(Did it now? I'll have to come out of the shower more often for her then...)


hahahahaha XD maybe you should you should hear about when we make you shirtless too she goes nuts.
Btw...shes going to kill me now.

....Ohhhh your so dead -___-
And Mayuri, why do you keep popping in here out of no where? xD

To check up on the rp, I like to know how well Raita plays me, yet she has some of my behavior played out wrong.
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Miharu Hachiko

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jun 25, 2010 9:00 pm

"Save me!" I mouthed at her only she began to walk away with her captain, leaving me here alone to get scolded at. I now faced my captain and chuckled rubbing the back of my head smiling.
"I uh, I didn't mean that. I'm sorry, I had no idea you were there." I said trying to convince him otherwise.
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Gin Ichimaru

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyTue Jun 29, 2010 12:23 pm

(Miharu, what where you going to have me ask...you made me stuck lol.)
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Miharu Hachiko

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyTue Jun 29, 2010 7:26 pm

(Um, I'm not sure, ask about her past life so you can know more about it her? Idk xD)
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Gin Ichimaru

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyTue Jun 29, 2010 9:47 pm

( ok ^^)

I walked with Raita, taking her to my office.
"take a seat raita." i said. I took a seat as well pouring some tea for the two of us.
"raita, I'd like to know more about you.Can you remember before you died?" i asked most of us soul reapers couldn't i was one that could.
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyWed Jun 30, 2010 9:20 am

I looked at my captain wondering why he asked but answered the question anyway.
"yeah, i remember." i told him.
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Mayuri Kurotsuchi

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jul 02, 2010 1:41 am

"Think before you talk." he scolded her.
Once Gin and Raita had left he now looked back at her.
"I want to speak with you, come with me. Now." he demanded as he began to walk.
He looked back only once to make sure she was following behind him.
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jul 02, 2010 10:56 am

I sat there for a moment in thought. then my smile widened.
"then, as your first order. You, are to tell me your past lifes story..well, not all of it. just who you where." i told her correcting myself at the end.I then awaited her to tell me.
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jul 02, 2010 11:05 am

u looked at him oddly for a moment, why did it matter who i was if i was someone else now i asked myself.I then smiled at him. he was a little bit odd the way he talked, the way he always smiled. At the same time it also creeped me out.
"Alright, i"ll tell you...well, most of it." I said with a smile slightly making fun of the way he gave me the order in the first place. I told him who i was in my past and i told him where i lived and about my family. But i kept most things to myself...the bad things.
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Gin Ichimaru

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jul 02, 2010 2:48 pm

(really, i creep you out...nice to know :/ )

i smiled again wider pouring more tea form myself as she finished telling me her story.
"i see." i said. but knew she was keeping things from me.She had a fake smile on her face her eyes could tell you a horror story a million times over.Usually i would find this amusing but for some reason seeing her in that form of pain saddened my usually chipper mood.
"you sound like you had a pretty normal life...however, i get the feeling you didn't tell me everything." i said.
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Miharu Hachiko

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jul 02, 2010 4:04 pm

"Yes Captain." Miharu put her hands in her pocket as she followed behind, looking at the ground as she walked, only to feel him glance at her once or twice to make sure she was still following. Oddly enough they didn't walk back to the 12th division but found themselves in what looked to be an abandoned neighborhood with not a person or cat in sight. She finally looked up at him.
"Why are we here exactly? I thought you wanted to talk, this doesn't seem like the greatest place of all things."
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jul 02, 2010 6:43 pm

(lol sorry hun XD)

I looked up at my captain slightly surprised now and nodded.
"your rite, i didn't." was all i said now looking down saddened. i then decided to tell him everything about me, the pains of my past and how my family really treated me.By the time i had finished tears threatened to poor from my eye but i held it all in.
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 4 EmptyFri Jul 02, 2010 7:31 pm

(I'm listening to the song redemption by gackt, which is the name of this rp lol)
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