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Raita Serpantine
Miharu Hachiko
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


Posts : 637
Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 1:08 pm

I continued my stance ready for anything now serious.Mayuri walked over to your work examining it he poked at it with his large fingernail and smiled seeing everything done properly.He walked up behind Miharu.
"I see you've finished?" he questioned her.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 1:14 pm

"Yes, no thanks to your help." I let the last part be a whisper so he wouldn't hear me on how i was bashing on him from annoyance. I then whipped my hands and turned around to face him.
The man now bolted after you, as he swung his sword sideways that would cut you in half if a direct hit.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 1:19 pm

I blocked the attack quickly with my wooden sword, i could tell this guy wasn't going to go easy on me. He had a real sword.
"well, this is oddly not fair." i pouted then hit him in the head with the wooden sword.I was starting to have fun. fighting was always one of my favorite things to do.I analyzed everything my opponent did carefully. Mayuri had heard what you had said to him but brushed it aside.
"come."he now ordered Miharu to follow him.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 28
Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 1:24 pm

"Sure." Miharu threw away the paper towel and followed behind him.
"Oh yes, please excuse my rudeness!" Gin now grabbed a wooden sword off the rack and through it to the man as he now set down his real sword, and got in yet another position. He now waited for your first attack
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


Posts : 637
Join date : 2010-06-22
Age : 34
Location : makai(demon world)

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 1:30 pm

I now slightly laughed getting back into my stance.
"yeah, that might work better." I said. I then awaited the fight to begin once more.Mayuri led Miharu down a few halls then through another door. He began to show her various experiments and things that they did in the recherche and development building.
"these are the things that we do here, I will be testing you on a few things to see where you fit best." He told her.He then looked at miharu a slight smile on his face.
"you said you had no experience in this field, how did you know what to do?"
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 1:47 pm

"I once dissected in Biology class, I used that as a reference." I said shrugging my shoulders like it was no big deal. I continued to walk as I looked at the many different kinds of things.
The black haired man now this time used the sword and jabbed inwards towards you stomach as one might do when fencing. As you fought Gin sat down and began sipping on lemonade in a happy manor. (xD)
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 1:54 pm

(ewww lemonade i hates dat stuffs)

I jumped into the air lading on his sword then jumped again making his sword fall to the ground. while in the air i hit his head again and landed behind him placing to sword to his back as if i would to stab through his torso.
"is that all you got?"I asked playfully. This was slightly to easy.Mayuri looked at you placing a hand to his chin for a moment.
"I see." He said and continued leading Miharu around.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 1:57 pm

I kept following behind him keeping to myself as I looked around.
The man was surprised by this as the kick to the head he hadn't saw coming only to have a sword pointed to his back. He then quickly turned pushing your sword away with his hand and held his sword to your neck.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 2:11 pm

my eyes widened in surprise for a moment not seeing that coming then i smirked. I took a chance and teliported behind him. i did a leg sweep then held my sword to his through.
"what, you didn't think i was just gonna stand there?" i asked smiling.Mayuri was finally done showing Miharu around with the exception of one room.
"don't forget where things are, it wouldn't be very pleasant for you if you got lost." he warned.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 2:22 pm

"Getting lost isn't on my agenda." I said wondering if that was all he had to show me.
"Was that all?" I then asked with my hands folded.
The man grinned now seeing how serious you were. He did a backflip but while in the process used his foot to kick your sword up in the air. When he landed he caught it, now with both swords. Gin began clapping and called out. "Nicely done you two!"
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 2:29 pm

Mayuri turned looking back at miharu.
"yes, why?" he asked walking her.I stood there dumbfounded but then regained my composure and smiled.
"well, that was fun." i said
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 2:39 pm

"No reason." I said to him.
Gin then stood up and took the swords from him.
"I wil sat 3rd seat, for now." he smiled
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 2:46 pm

I blinked again surprised by this but smiled.Mayuri looked at Miharu once more.
"ok" he said before walking off leaving her alone.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 3:02 pm

"Uh Captain," I said raising a hand then ran to catch up with him.
"I've noticed everyone has swords, where do we get those at?" she asked confused.
The man now scampered off getting back to work on what he was doing earlier.
"You may be dismissed for the day now Raita." Gin said.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 7:54 pm

I nodded waiting for my Captain to leave me.once he was out of sight i began to walk around. I wondered how Miharu was doing and also wondered if i was aloud to go visit her.
"well, if im not, i can just say i didn't know." i told myself. i then began to walk around to see if i could Find Miharu.Mayuri looked at you in disbelief then turned his back to you.
"you should have woken up with it. it should be arriving soon." he told you.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


Posts : 926
Join date : 2010-04-29
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Location : Houkagakure No Sato

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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyWed Jun 23, 2010 9:51 pm

"What do you mean? Like it will just magically pop up out of no where?" I had no idea what this guy was trying to tell me. A sword can't just appear. I then rubbed the back of my neck a little irritated.
As Gin left to head back to his office he counted take you off his mind, something about you was off, yet it interested him to know what it was that sent him that message.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 12:22 am

Mayuri began to walk off.
"the sword you will be recieving is part of your soul." he says and finally walks away.He was slightly irritated by your constant question asking. but for some reason he was becomming quit interested in Miharu.I continued walking around i had been almost everywhere asking for Miharu. Finally i came to sector 12.
"well, here goes nothing." i said sighing.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 12:43 am

"Eh." as he walked off I decided to take a look around since I was finished with my work anyways, which was surprising since it was my first day here.
Finally seeing a girl walking around clueless I now recognized her.
"Raita!" I called out and ran over to her.
"How'd you find me?"
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 12:54 am

I jumped in surprise hearing my name called out and looked in the direction of the voice.
"Miharu!...there you are, ive been looking all over for you." i said hugging her.
"so, who'de you get stuck with, creepy?"i asked laughing slightly.Mayuri went to his room for the night and went to take a shower.The whole time in there he couldnt get miharus face out of his mind. she was lick a plegue to him somesort of virus spreading through out his entire body.This began to annoy him.
"who is this girl....WHY, is she so important?"He said to himself.
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 1:08 am

(shower scene, nice touch ;D)

"You remember the guy we passed by when we were walking with the head captain? The one with the make up and crap? I got put in his division, out of all the people. At least your captain probably talks to you and EXPLAINS what to do."
She crossed her arm remembering how he never specified her job in the first place.
"His name is Captain Kurotsuchi. Well whatever forget that, how's your division?" I asked.
Gin had the girl pictured still in his mind, and now he wanted straight answers, yet he couldn't figure out what to ask her in particular, since he didn't know himself. The man then got up from where he was sitting and decided to look for her.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 1:46 pm

Mayuri completed his shower and put on a clean outfit. He stood in his room for a few moments then decided to go for a walk. Still thinking about Miharu and sighed agitated wondering still why he felt like this.
"oh, that must suck. My division is kinda interesting i haven't gotten much answers but i had to fight some guy with a wooden sword i also got put in 3er position on the team." I explained smiling proud of myself.
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Mayuri Kurotsuchi

Mayuri Kurotsuchi


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 2:52 pm

(Why did you add me in the shower, Raita?)
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Miharu Hachiko

Miharu Hachiko


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 3:48 pm

"Good for you! I probably got placed last or something, I suck at science. I met this guy named Akon while I was working and he helped explain all the division, I would have loved to been placed in Division 2, I mean it would be kick ass working with prisoners. But whatever, yours sounds really fun." Miharu placed a hand on her hip and gave a smile.
Gin walked around the division in search for her. He knocked on her door, but when no one answered it must have meant she was out. He then left his division and walked around.
"Where is she?" he asked himself.
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 9:29 pm

Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:
(Why did you add me in the shower, Raita?)

cause it made sissy extremely happy XD
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Raita Serpantine

Raita Serpantine


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PostSubject: Re: Redemption   Redemption - Page 3 EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 9:34 pm

I smiled and looked at Miharu.
"hey, you wanna see my place?" i asked her as i began walking towards division 3 again.Mayuri was still out for his walk not doing much i might add.
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